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Tell me of the war most won,
tell me of the skies,
tell me of the fallen sun
that lingers in your eyes.

Tell me of the outcast
whose life is still yet young.
Tell me if a love will last
if its glories remain unsung.

I will not stand idly by
while war is waged on the soul.
I will not spread a lie
and watch it take its toll.

I will love you with every breath,
with every sigh I make,
and unto my very death
you can have my heart to break.

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Kind of started as a nonsense one liner that grew into an OMG IT WORKS! Not quite sure where this came from, but I like it.
What do you guys think?

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~Spirit-Of-The-Moon Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really beautiful. Fantastic job :heart:
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:iconthe-allusionist:
^_^ Thank you my friend. :hug:
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:icondakeyblademastahxd:
~DaKeybladeMastahXD Jul 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
[I will not stand idly by
while war is waged on the soul.
I will not spread a lie
and watch it take its toll.]
:iconthinksplz: "I must not tell lies..."

[I will love you with every breath,
with every sigh I make,
and unto my very death
you can have my heart to break.]
:iconthinksplz: Mustn't we all? :heart: Beautifully said. I think this poem had indescribable wisdom tied to it, but it's call to humanity to stand up and fight is undeniable. That might be what I love so much about it. It tells us that we can all do better, and that love is truly everything.
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:iconthe-allusionist:
"I am sorry professor, but I must not tell lies."

Wisdom, humm wise? I guess I can take that. ^^;
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:icondakeyblademastahxd:
~DaKeybladeMastahXD Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
It was the kind of poem that was just right for my mood today, I suppose. Forgive me if I was little overly fond of it, if you didn't even think much of the poem itself :P
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:iconthe-allusionist:
Well I didn't interpret what ever my muse was telling me as wisdom, but a poem is a poem is a poem, you are free to see what you will.
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:icondakeyblademastahxd:
~DaKeybladeMastahXD Jul 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
And that's all that matters. :)
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:iconthe-allusionist:
Hence the beauty of poetry. ^_^
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:icondakeyblademastahxd:
~DaKeybladeMastahXD Jul 13, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Hence hence! You are quite the poet.

... Oh yes, Felix is very much at work today. Oh well. Thank you Felix <3
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:iconthe-allusionist:
^^; lol yay for teh poet points
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